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You woke to the sound of your loud alarm clock. You turned it off and attempted to sleep. Then your Uncle came in. "Sorry, love, do you not remember your promise to go to school today~?" He sang sung out.

"Promises are meant to be broken..." You mumbled.

"Well not this promise, love. Now get up and join me for breakfast~!" He sang song again. With a loud groan you rolled out of bed. You literally rolled onto the floor and rolled over to your dresser. Then you got up and picked out your clothes before going to the bathroom to get a shower.

You looked in the mirror. Your eyes were red and puffy and your hair was a rats nest. [My mom always says my hair looks like a rats nest when it's a big mess so there that is if your wondering.] You remembered everything that happened yesterday and a stray tear rolled down your face. You quickly jumped in the shower and continued to get ready.

~~~~~ TIME SKIP ~~~~~

You were walking to the bus stop wearing your usual outfit. [f/c] long sleeved shirt, a [f/s] sweatshirt over it, black skinny jeans, and [f/c] converse. Your hair was in a messy bun. You didn't bother with makeup. You never did.

You were having terrible anxiety and you were tired. You just wanted to curl up in a ball and die. You felt guilt, sorrow, and pain. You feel like your mothers death was your fault. You couldn't get the pain that Alfred put you through yesterday out of your head. You wanted to just die.


You dreaded the walk to first period. No one picked on you that morning. They were whispering and pointing to you though. 'Does news really spread that quickly...' You thought to yourself. Then you heard that stupid loud obnoxious voice you hated oh so much!

"Hey, _____! Hey! _____! Hey-" you interrupted him.

"You are standing in front of me stop screaming! Why can't you just leave me the hell alone!? I'm done taking your crap! I'm done taking EVERYONE'S crap!" And with that said you walked away.

Everyone stood around dumbfounded. "She wants me!" Alfred said making a cocky grin. Then he made his way to his first class. When you walked into your first period class all eyes fell on you. It startled you and you just stood there. Then after a little the teacher walked in and made you sit in your seat.

She welcomed you back gave you a huge packet of missed work and continued with that days lesson. 'Well just fucking fabulous...'

~~~~~ TIME SKIP TO LUNCH ~~~~~

You had been bugged by Alfred all day. Every one stopped bullying you and most of them just ignored you. The rest talked to you and said sorry for your loss. That just pissed you off. No one understood your pain.

Oh but the worst was Alfred. He bugged you every chance he got. Luckily for you he only had one class period with you. That was good. You walked into the lunch room and sat at your loner table. Only today it wasn't the loner table. As soon as you sat down a group of girls joined you. They said sorry for your loss and started making small talk with you.

Then Alfred came along. "Leave me alone Jones." You said through gritted teeth. The other girls joined you and shooed him away with you. You were starting to like these people. By the end of lunch you had made a few new friends. Your even made a best friend! Her name was [best friend's name].


You were sitting in your last class while all the students started at you. You were looking down at your desk but you could feel there stares. You felt as if they were staring into your soul.

Then a loud mouthed ass face decided to use his obnoxious voice. At least that's what you thought of it. "Dudes! Stop staring at her! She feels uncomfortable! Don't worry _____ I'm the hero!"

"Oh my GOD! Just shut up!" You yelled accomplished by a groan. Then you face-desked out of annoyance.

"I'm just doing my job being the hero-!"

The teacher had just walked in and Alfred quickly shut up and sat down. He couldn't afford another detention or he would be kicked out of football. You thanked the teacher in your mind and actually paid attention to what they were learning.

That was until someone thew a note on your desk. You saw it was from Alfred. 'Alfred FUCKING Jones I will have your head!' You screamed in your mind. He was seriously starting to annoy you. You looked up at the teacher and when she turned to the board you read the note.

'Dear _____,

         Please, please, please, please, PLEASE meet me on the rood after school! I have to tell you something! Please I'm begging you!


You looked at Alfred and he gave you the puppy dog eyes. You sighed in frustration and just nodded turning back to the front so you could try to get a decent grade.


The bell had rung and you quickly gathered your stuff and went to you locker. You made sure you had all the over due work, the torture you would be enduring over the next week with this, then quickly headed to the roof.

When you got there you saw Alfred had been waiting. "What do you want." You said flatly. He looked at you. His eyes were red. Was he...? Was he crying!?

"_____... I...I'm sorry!" He cried out. You just stood there shocked. "I only bullied you because you made me nervous! I didn't know what it was! It annoyed me so I thought maybe it would go away if I bullied you! I didn't realize how much pain I put you through! I didn't realize that I loved you until I saw you cry! You never cried in front of me and when I saw you cry that horrible day my heart ached! Then when I saw your arms... Don't ever do that again! I love you _____ I really do!" He was sobbing.

You were speechless. You started to see Alfred in a different way. You didn't notice that he got up until he pulled you into a tight hug. Now you were crying. "Please, _____, give me a chance?" He pulled back a little to look at you with pleading eyes. "I really do love you."

You bit your lip and thought. He hurt you for so long. Ever since you entered [School name] he bullied you. But you started to develop feelings. Suddenly he pulled you back into a tight hug and said something else. "Can we put the past behind us? Start over?"

You pulled back from the hug and looked him in the eyes. Then you spoke. "You hurt me for so many years. You made my life a living hell." He looked like he was about to cry. You continued. "But... I can give you a chance." He lite up again. He pulled you into another tight hug ,but this time you hugged back. "I may not be able to forget the past but together we can make a better future."

He pulled back from the hug and pulled you into a passionate kiss. After awhile you pulled back and gasped for much needed air, Alfred did the same. He smiled at you and you smiled back. That was the first smile you made in awhile. "You know your even more beautiful when you smile." He said suddenly.

You blushed and then giggled. "Well. Should we get going?" You nodded. You both walked home together hand in hand. For in a long time you felt happy. You smiled up to the sky. 'I miss you mom. I hope your having fun. I finally found someone to love. Don't be sad once you find out about what I used to do to my body... I have someone who will help me stop... I love you.' You talked to your mom then continued your way talking to Alfred.

For the first time in awhile you felt truly happy.

This is NOT the last part! There will be 1 more part ^-^

Well I don't have much to say... It didn't take me that long to update though which is good! I didn't read this over so sorry for any mistakes :/

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Rrbzrulez Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Student Traditional Artist
I would had not forgiven him no way and this almost made me cry god the feels 1 
hmwwawcciawcccw Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2015
how come reader-chan's are always so quick to forgive?
kayemma Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Me in reality
Alfred: please forgive me!
Me: *looks at scars*No Way You Bitch!!!*kicks him off the roof*
LifeIsACereal Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015
Ohmygosh, when reader-chan said, "But... I guess I can give you a chance."
Me: "NOOOOOOOOOOO *screeching noises*"
...but then my baby brother walked in my room and gave me a banana xD
SayEeda19 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
That`s so random. Was he watching the Minions or something XD
LifeIsACereal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015
I don't really know... I actually didn't even know we had bananas til he gave one to me xD
SayEeda19 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XD Lol, well if you don`t have food, banana saves the day~~
LifeIsACereal Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015
Always xD
SayEeda19 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Unless some of the minions come and steal them all then you`d die of hunger coz the minions took them all and you have no food...
LifeIsACereal Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015
...but I don't just eat bananas xD
SayEeda19 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I do.
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Kokonue Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*still crying*
anakind87 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015
I would rather have Germany, France, Russia or EVEN - AND ESPECIALLY Canada as my sweetheart than that fuckwad Alfred....for someone who bullies someone for a reason such as 'being in love', - my, my, what a way to destroy that someone's trust and respect - and everything that goes with love. 

Alright, alright - I know this is a story, and while it's a good story - and the mother's death sent me in a crying spell(with the thought of it being my OWN mother - which I hope won't happen for a long time) - I feel like the person who should have been someone who was secretly interested, would NOT be Alfred/America.
lpso18 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2016
are you sure about france?
anakind87 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016
Now that you've mentioned it, maybe not.
kitsune-cross Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2015  Professional General Artist
I thought Matthew was my bff! -3-
NancyTran Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
dracomalfoyismine Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2015
I wouuld have pushed the little fuckwad off the roof
unicornfarts1 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2015   Artist
So true, the fucking asshole doesn't deserve a happy ending
JolteonBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015
Alfred: :(
Me: Alfred you were being the biggest dickwad ever... and after you fucking bully me for a long fucking time you have the shit to apologize and goddamn confess to me?
Me: You know what *Jumps off roof * There are titans I need to do stuff
Alfred: noo
Me: haha I have 3dmg suck it loser. :) 
tabithamac13 Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
My mom says my hair is a mop
galaxysnowleopard Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Am I the only one who thinks of Richard from wassabi productions when alfie said she wants me? X333
SweetArtz363 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
"Well just fucking fabulous..." I laughed. I watch too much Pewds...
FabuEmily Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015
WolfRinKagamine Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2015
Feels are exploding! Ha! I love this though! So sweet yet so sad, i'm not bullied but I do suffer from the same issues so these do make me feel a lot better <3 Amazing writing! 
PrussianGamer101 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
pikachu45638 Featured By Owner May 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
My mum says birds nest cuz there is always something sticking out 😅
kirstenthefgt Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
real way i meet my best friend:
*in the locker room getting ready for swiming*
carrington:HOLY SHIT SNK SHIRT!!!!!!!!!!1!
me: ._____. well son of a bitch i thought every one in this country ass town was a twat waffle
carrington : nope
me : do you ship armin X eren
carrington: my otp
me: ...... marry me
FabuEmily Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015
I've actually changed my Skype name to Obama and started to address all my friends as 1 of 300M twat waffles
FabuEmily Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
I need to start greeting people like that then
kotadog88 Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Sandy345 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My friends wouldn't have shooed him away they would have roweled like dogs and if he came really close they would try to bit him
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 30, 2015  Student Artist

when he said "she wants me"
i thought of wassabi productions
i read it in richards voice too XD
great story im crying ;-;
MaiaCattie101 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Student Writer
Bloodpaw221 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Student Artist

EchoingInsanity15 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2015  Student Artist
Hm~... How about no and then I bitch slap you with a shovel, and then a water pipe? Sound good? 😇
anakind87 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015
Wow, we have another Russia - and 2p Russia:D Haha, what a response from you:D 
WolfyAce Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Fuck no. I'd slap a bitch.
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student General Artist

I would punch him in the face and give him a really mean American stereotype insult .-.
PrussianGamer101 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
Lforeverisa Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014
InkWriterThePony Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yes it has! XD
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE meet me on the ROOD after school!

Excuse me, but may I ask what a rood is?
But I wanted to meet on the rood...not the roof...
Speerut Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Roofs are so overrated. Roods are more cooler.
Duh. Didnt you hear?
lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student General Artist
Oh ok
Nope I didn't hear because I am a loner
BluebellArtist Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
dont do roods kids it's bad for yah
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
When Al asked for a second chance, I was listing to te song Superhero and it said to re-write our history and I'm liek " OOOOOOO YAS "*frantically nods head*

Yes.....when a depressed child comes back to school after a long time, all teachers have to gove them a fuck ton of school work to finish.....wait........I have seen this happen before.....except that kid wasn't depressed......
sunflower246135 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
While was reading this, the 5th part came out
Diobites Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
How does one make a friend and a lover so quickly o.O well anyways nice job
weeya1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
This accsully made tears come out of my eyes!!
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