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I finally finished it! WOOH! So here is part... I had to check... Part 3! Finally the secret of why reader-chan had a break down! I know that this is also short but hehe I am lost okay? Well just enjoy part 3 for now!

You haven't went to school in a week. The only person you saw from school was your best friend Matthew Williams. You lived with your Uncle Arthur now. What happened a week a week ago made you lose it. You spent each day crying for hours and when you finally ran out of tears you sat there emotionless. You haven't eaten ever since that day. That horrible day.

~~~~~ FLASH BACK ~~~~~

Your Uncle had a tears streaming down his face as he told you the news. "_____, your mother... Y-your mother has.... Your mother got in a c-car accident and d-d-d-died!"

You were shocked. Tears instantly were shed. You fell to the floor as choked sobs were let out. 'No no no! Not mom! Not...!'

~~~~~ END OF FLASH BACK ~~~~~

After that you don't know what happened. All you know is that you fell asleep after crying for hours and woke up in your Uncles guest room. "_____?" Arthur yelled out. 'He must have just gotten back.

You were laying on your new bed, back facing the door, hugging your knees to your chest. "_____, please come down." He pleaded. "You need to eat! You need to go to school... You need to move on with your life, _____..."

"Why... Why should I have to go back to that place...?" You said in a hushed tone.

"What do you mean-"

"No one there cares about me! If I go back my life will just get worse! I hate that fucking place! I would rather DIE than go back there!" You cried out. You started to silently cry.

"Oh, _____..." Arthur sat on the end of your bed and pulled you into a tight hug, softly singing. After a you calmed down he released you from the hug. "Now. How about we go get something to eat, love?" He asked with hopeful eyes. You nodded and followed him out the door.

~~~~~ TIME SKIP - Alfred's POV ~~~~~

I walked into school and once again _____ was absent. Every one was going to find out today why she hasn't been showing up. I care. I really do. I only started bullying her because she made me feel this weird feeling. I only just realized that that feeling was love.

I always thought it was just something stupid and it annoyed me that I couldn't understand it! After seeing _____ cry made me realize it. It pined me too see her cry. I have never seen her cry before.

~~~~~ Le Time skip ~~~~~

As I walked into my last class I noticed I wasn't the only one awaiting the news about _____. I wanted to know so badly. Just then the bell rung and the teacher came in and started talking right away. "As you all know last week _____ _____ had left early and she wasn't all to happy."

'No shit Sherlock!' Was what I thought at that moment. "Well _____'s mom had gotten into a car crash and the impact was so great that she had... died..." by now the teacher was crying. Tears pricked the corners of my eyes. As I looked around I noticed other student on the verge of tears to.

"When Miss._____ returns I expect all of you to give her space and treat her with respect. Don't act like I don't know what has been going on. I'm still not sure of exactly sure of who has caused what is going on." She glared at me. Then she started the days lesson. Not like I was listening.

~~~~~ Le Time Skip - Your POV ~~~~~

You were sitting in your room debating on weather you ready to use the internet. Last time you ever touched your laptop it gave depression. Arthur got a new laptop attempting to make you feel better.

Then your Uncle walked in. "_____, love?" He asked. You looked up at him as he continued. "Someone from school is here. He asked to see you. Now I have to leave for a meeting so please make sure he is gone before 8. He's in the dinning room! Bye, love!" He said that last part while running out.

You were confused. Someone from school was visiting you? And it was a boy?! Something wasn't right. Just to make sure you grabbed your [f/c] sweat shirt and threw it on while going down the stairs, almost tripping in the process.

When you walked into the dinning room you were shocked by who you saw. 'Why the hell is he here!?' You thought bitterly.

Alfred F. Jones was standing in your Dinning room. The one who ruined your life. Why? It was still a mystery to you. He looked up and saw the shock you were in and then opened his mouth to talk, but you interrupted him before he could speak.

"What the hell are you doing here!? To bully me some more and laugh in my face about my mothers death!? I hope your fucking happy! I lost the one person I loved dearly! The only one who ever worried about me!" You cried out.

"_____ I-"

"No! Just shut up! I have put up with you long enough! I am done! You know how many suicidal thoughts I have had ever since YOU came into my life?!" Now there were falling freely from your eyes.

"I love you." He blurted out before you could interrupt him. He just stared at you. 'He loves me?' Your angered eyes softened a little, but they quickly resumed there fury. 'You do not love him! He put you through so much pain!' You clenched your fist. You couldn't believe what you were about to do.

"You wanna know just how much pain you've put me through?" You looked down and stayed silent for a bit. Then you let out a shaky breath and slowly pulled up your long sleeves and held out your arms, wrist facing up. Revealing all the scars, and cuts both fresh and scaring ones. You slowly looked up and saw the shock on Alfred's face. You quickly pulled down your sleeves once again. Alfred had a horrified look on his face.

"_____ I had-" You interrupted him once again.

"No. Don't say a thing. Get. Out."

"_____ just listen-"

"No! Alfred fucking Jones get the HELL out of my house!" You screamed in rage.

He looked up at you with sad eyes and started to turn and leave. Before he left he said one thing. "I really do love you, _____..."

"Well I hate you! I fucking hate you!" Once the he was out the door you slammed it shut and locked it. Then you fell to the floor and cried your heart out. After awhile you finally ran out of tears and pulled your knees up to you chest and sat curled in a ball.

~~~~~ TIME SKIP ~~~~~

You woke up in your bed. "I must of fell asleep on the floor." You murmured. You suddenly remembered what happened and started to silently cry. You laid back down and continued to cry until you fell asleep again.
SO I finally got it done! :iconyayamericaplz:
No go away Alfred you made Reader-chan sad T^T

Well here it is~! I know it's short.... :iconemocornerplz:

Well Yep that's it...

Part 1- everybodydotheflop65.deviantar…
Part 2- everybodydotheflop65.deviantar…
Link 3- If you don't know where this is look at the title... If you still don't know you may need help
Link 4- everybodydotheflop65.deviantar…
Part 5- Hopefully coming soon~!
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Speera Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2016  Student General Artist
If you don't post the next part i will eat you face =v
just kidding XD
btw, this fanfic is awesome dude
I LOVE ITefnrg[etgrijreiofiuwethjiufhiuehgiurehiugfhriurehiu
SayEeda19 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I`m gonna run out of tears soon. So til then I`m gonna continue reading
DragonTamer19991 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Alfred: I love you!
Me: Now what Alfred Jone? Do you expect this to be some fairytale where I go "I love you Alfred!" and jump into your arms? Well it isn't! This is reality and you have to face up to what you have done. You hurt me. You bullied me and now my mother, the light in this darkness, has been taken from me. So don't you come in here and say that you love me because what you have done...that cannot be excused! NOW GET THE HELL OUT OF MY HOUSE!
SenpaiOverload Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
Pfft he expected me to be like " I love you too and I forgive you" and the jump into his arms and live happily ever after, well NO THIS AIN'T FAIRYTALE ALFRED
ladyblackbird13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016're doomed.
XxCloudingEchoes Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
You don't bully someone and make them feel worthless because you "love" them... That's not how things work on EARTH.
nora-diamond Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Student Digital Artist

You bullied her because you love her?!?! Is that how boys say I love you? Boys.... So pathetic...

( The story is so sad T^T but I'm loving it... )
kayemma Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Me : I won't cry....*cries alot*
Kokonue Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why am I so emotional;-;
Lauradrakkyn Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yas. Feel da burn Alfred Fucking Jones.
Mishmiu Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Mishmiu Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Not calling out any names but, someone's got a weird way of showing love
kotadog88 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
JolteonBlue Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015
Me: Alfred you know what I'm just gonna put you on a table and flip that table
Alfred: 0_0
Skypaw222 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay you are the greatest writer ever! Hugs 
galaxysnowleopard Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Llllooooolllll Alfred fucking Jones X3333
Awesome story tho! hamburgers for you!
PandoraHearts808 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
*punches Alfred FUCKING Jones in the face* 

Dear Author,

Thank you for the wonderful story. The story is like me when I'm fucking angry at someone.
YOU'RE AWESOME. I'm sorry but please excuse me for my cussing. *It's a bad habit of mine*

Sincerely Reader. 

*turns to Alfred and punches the MOTHERFUCKER in the face again* 
Hiyoriicchi Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015
SweetArtz363 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I'll also him. I'll slap him a million times! A million times! Fucking bastard could of just told me in the fuckung first p-l-a-c-e!!!! *throws punches in the air*
AmeliaHalfDead Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015
Okay seriously. WTF was Alfred thinking saying that he loved her when she is going trough a break down? 

Is he THAT stupid??
LittleMissRookie Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconemocornerplz: I'll take the corner *snatches*
PrussianGamer101 Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
A-yesha Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Student Artist
I was crying but when I read "Alfred Fucking Jones" I don't know why, but that made me laugh. .-.
FabuEmily Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2015
Fun fact, when Himaruya gave out human names, Fuck was an option for F :)
A-yesha Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2015  Student Artist
Hahaha--*dies of laughter*
PandoraHearts808 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
It's hate but I did the same too
A-yesha Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015  Student Artist
XD yea right
PandoraHearts808 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
well not really cry but like made me really sad like depression but it's not 
NOMNOMSUN Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Arthur and Alfred are'm dating my younger step-uncle?!

OMGimsoboredhahaha Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015
Omg I'm such a crybaby I litteraly bawled my eyes out while reading this. Don't be offended it's a really well written story!
LadyofLegends Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2014  Student Writer
good ol' Uncle Iroh to come around and make me feel better with his tea and stuff!

Er, I mean, Uncle Arthur. XD
xxScribbleChanxx Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014  Hobbyist
sparklerthesableye Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Reader-chan, quit being an asshat. You're skinny, you suicidal retard.
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
*sits in emo corner* Al being confessive?! The damned feels man......the god damn tells you that I enjoy reading this
Comedywiz411 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014   Writer
... *whispers* I'll take that corner... :iconemocornerplz:

*in corner*

SpongeBob (Cries) Big Fool Emoji-07 (Cry) [V2] Pikachu Crying Plz [EXO] Kris ''Legit'' Crying Emoticon  Y u do dis to me Alfred.... OH SCREW IT!!! *runs out of corner* Cry run Cry run 1 1 ALFRED WAIT!! I TAKE U BACK!!!
LifelessQ Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No... Mum... cry :iconcanadasulkplz: 
harlie15234 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Filmographer
I KNOW IT!  oh have I mentioned awesome man!
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks :3
SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Alfred f. jones
F = Fucking
Omg i took  this the wrong way
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*le wild author is now thinking the same at least I think so*
SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
... *in my mind:
Alfred is fucking jones *
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2014
I have a kid in y class with the last name Jones.......OH HONHONHONHONHONHON~
SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2014
Everything is so wrong now XD still dun care
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yep we were thinking the same thing XD
SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
tippycat332 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
HAIBAI21 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'M TRYING!!!! GETTIN THERE!!! Just wait a little *cough*lot*cough* longer!!!
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